Response Paper: (400 words minimum):

PERCY BYSSHE SHELLEY (1792-1822)
pp.819-820, "England in 1819," 821,
"A Defence of Poetry," 823-5

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Choose one:

Option 1: Compare and contrast the attitudes about life in Shelley's "England in 1819" with those of Wordsworth in "The World Is Too Much With Us". Do their attitudes agree or differ? Give specific support to argument.

Option 2: In the the longer narrative poems by Shelley on the "Complete Poetical Works" Web site ("The Revolt of Islam," "Prometheus Unbound," "The Cenci", for example), the poet includes an "Author's Preface" that explains and gives background and inspiration for the poem. Do these prefaces serve a productive function to the longer narrative poems? If so, why and how? Give details as regards one or more of the poems. Be specific with your support.


Revision Guidelines (Printout)

 In writing and revising your response paper, follow this triple-edged rule:
  1. Choose a very specific thesis (follow the prompt); expand, explain and analyze that thesis in great detail. Every sentence should explain or reveal or give support to your thesis. Make your thesis or the author the subject of every sentence. (Do not use "I")
  2. Do not summarize or discuss the plot at all; focus instead on following your support with specific discussion, comments, and analysis; do not generalize; be specific.
  3. As you word-process your first drafts, print out and proofread the text for all typos, mechanics, style and clarity, including "be" verbs, passive voice, and usage with the guidelines below - eliminate inaccurate or informal phrasing. A spellcheck feature can only accomplish some spellchecks - proofread for spelling independently with your eyes from a printout.
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Before you submit a response paper or essay, please proofread and revise for the following items:

[NCH] = The New Century Handbook (4th ed.) references by chapter/section and page numbers(s) with extermal links to the handbook companion web site and additional help pages for selected markings. Grading markings appear in bold soft brackets: { }.


Clarity & Conciseness

{ PV }: Revise passive voice for active voice:  additional help
[ NCH: 28a-4, pp. 616-7; 30g, pp. 657-9]

{ be }: Omit auxiliary or helping verbs (unless an ongoing action): is / are, was / were, be / being
Revise or replace with active, concise verbs:  additional help
[ NCH:  30c, pp.  647-9]

{ U }: usage
Avoid these inexact and ambiguous verbs:
display,   exhibit,   portray,   seem,   show,   use / utilize / employ:  additional help
[ NCH:  5c-4, pp.  97]
Revise and avoid these nouns as subjects for sentences:
thing(s),  the reader,  the audience, today
Keep the focus on the author and/or thesis, unless a prompt-specific question about "audience."

Revise and avoid these pronouns:
I, me (my),   one, you (your),   we (us, our)
Keep the focus on the author and/or thesis subject, - unless a prompt-specific personal experience question ("I," "me").
[ NCH:  6d, pp. 129-130, 17b-4, pp. 419]
{ logic } : reasoning,
[ NCH:  7f-g, pp. 159-166]

{ phrasing } : informal or vague,
[ NCH:  43c, pp. 756-8]



Organization & Content

{ analysis / develop }: Follow all examples and evidence with a well-developed discussion and analysis.
[ NCH:  7h, pp. 167-9]

{ example }: Introduce appropriate examples and evidence, and document them - see MLA below;
also check for plagiarism {PL ). - see course policies (left menu).
[ NCH: 11, pp. 251-285]

{ combine }: Subordinate and coordinate sentences. Do not begin with conjunctions or conjunctive adverbs.
[ NCH: 39, pp. 723-728]

{ MLA }: Paraphrase and parenthetically document examples and evidence according to the MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers - document all textbook references to prose by page number and poetry by line number(s). Avoid quotes (paraphrase and cite), and check for plagiarism.
[ NCH: 11, pp. 251-285; 13, pp. 313-364]

{ P / ¶ }: Paragraph length (4 to 7 sentences on average)
[NCH 6f, p. 131]
{ thesis }: Define the thesis clearly.
[ NCH:  7a,  pp. 139-144]
{ PS }: Do not write long plot summaries. Support your analysis with brief documented paraphrases.
[ NCH:  11c,  pp. 264-9]



Basic Grammar

{ AGREEMENT }: Subject-verb / pronoun-antecedent.
[ NCH:  31, pp. 662-8]

Sentences:
{ CS }: Comma splices
{ FRAG }: Fragments (incomplete sentences
{ RO }: Run-on sentences (no punctuation)
[ NCH:  33, 34, pp. 678-699]

Punctuation:
{ a / no a }: apostrophes
{ c / no c }: commas
{ cap / no cap  }: capital letters for proper nouns
{ col  }: colons
{ p  }: periods
{ qm  }: quotation marks
{ sc / no sc  }: semi-colons
[ NCH:  48-54, pp. 808-857]

{ SENSE }: Basic grammar and sentence structure (subject-predicate , etc.)
[ NCH:  28-32, pp. 612-676; 35-37, pp. 689-710]

{ sp } : Spelling
[ NCH:  47, pp. 793-806]